Your very strict inspector is here again and I'll keep coming until you drive me away - И ваш очень строгий инспектор снова тут, и я буду продолжать приходить, пока вы меня не прогоните:
35 And what is about the summer holidays? = And what about your summer holidays?
Здесь лучше сказать 'summer vacation'.
39. Yes I was writing smth in Turkish n have forgotten to change the it = Yes I was writing smth in Turkish and have forgotten to change it